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By request. If you like it and want others to see it, please favourite it so it gets shared around. That is the point of it Related items are [link] or [link] And I've now got the entire thing pasted below so you only have to download it if you want a properly formatted version. How to Comment By request, Ive created a tutorial on how to comment. This wont guarantee you give fantastic comments if you do this, but people asked for it, so here it is! Below are a few important aspects to take into consideration before commenting. After you read those, follow the following steps and write your responses to the questions in the comment field of your chosen artwork. Its broken down quite a lot so you should always find things to comment on. Consider This Absorb Are you open to absorb the image when you first look at it? Or is your mind in a state of critical analysis? Be open to take in the image before you look at it critically. Give the image a decent chance before commenting. Intent Are you going to point out something the artist did on purpose? Do you even know what the artist was trying to do? Is stylisation more important than realistic representation? Ask yourself these things before commenting. You may be insulting the artist by not taking into consideration what they were trying to do. Technicality Sometimes, the person you are commenting on may be oblivious to the terms you are using, and your words may indeed be wasted if they are too technical. Speak clear English, and explain anything that may be foreign to a less experienced artist. Just because you know technical terms, doesnt make you a better artist. Opinion These days, being opinionated is seen as a bad thing. I dont see why. What value does a fact have if it wasnt our opinion that makes them valuable? Be careful with your words and remember that they are the artist and they didnt draw the image for you (most likely). Your suggestions are no more than suggestions, but they can still be valuable and greatly appreciated. First Impression As nice as it is to hear first impressions sometimes, it may not be the best idea to actually leave a comment on your first time looking at it. Take some time (minutes to days) to go over the work and think about what you will say. You can tell the artist your first impression later. The best approach may be to choose a couple of titles from each heading, unless the artist likes/wants long comments General (and abstract) Appeal Do you like it in general? Is it well done? Why? Overall feel What is the overall feel of the image? Why? Is there a way to increase the impact? Objectivity Do you like what its of? Do you like how it is being depicted? Why? Subjectivity Do you like what its about? Why? Rhythm Are there patterns present? Do you like them? Do they add to the feel of the image successfully? How? Movement How did your eyes move over the image? How do they travel over it after youve taken it in? Is the movement too divided? Does it match the images theme? Why? Composition What do you think of the composition? Is it balanced? Is there a way to make it how the artist wants? Balance (tonal) Is there a reasonable balance of dark and light shapes? Do the tones match the intended mood? Are the darkest/lightest shapes interesting? Colour Do the colours appear natural/alien? How well do they define the mood of the image? Could the colours be improved? Which ones? Why? Did they use a palette effectively? Did they need to? Shape Does the image contain overall interesting shapes? How do these shapes affect the image? Could shapes be added/subtracted? Which ones and why? Attention What is the centre of attention for you? Why? What is it supposed to be? Refinement Did they work long enough on the image? Did they work too long on it? Did they go overboard with what they were trying to say? Could the message/forms be refined? How? Why? Could it do with/without a border of some kind? Details Are there hidden packets of detail that make you want to come back for more? Do you enjoy the detail of the image or is it too busy to look at? Is the image perhaps too sharp or too soft? Is it supposed to be? Figures (animals) Body Language What can you read of the body language of the character? Was it done well? Does it make you feel better/worse about the image? Why? Expression What does the expression of the character tell you? How does this make you feel? How does this alter your perception of the image? Why? Balance (body) Are the characters in balance? How does this affect the feel of the image? How does this change your disposition towards the character? Appeal Do you actually like the characters appearance/personality? Why? What do you think of the character in regards to appearance and/or personality? Accuracy Are the details of the character how the artist wants them? For example, do they match the style the artist was attempting? If not, what can be improved? Why? Association Are you able to connect with the character? Why? Are you supposed to be able to? Is there a way to improve the intended connection? Background (non-figures) Detail Is the background busy/calm enough to suit the mood of the image? Is it too distracting/plain? Why? What could be improved? Realism Does the background look accurate to life? If it is supposed to but doesnt, what could be improved? Emotion What does the background make you feel? Which parts make you feel this way? Why? Figures If the image has no figures, could it do with some? Why? If it has some, could it do without? Why? How would this affect the theme of the image? Connection Do you feel an affinity for the depicted scenery/background? Does it affect how you feel about the image? How? What Not To Say Okay, so this is just what I think, but these are some things I would avoid saying, as most people dont like to hear them. Untalented Dont tell someone they have talent. Talent is circumstantial, and if its untested, its going to waste. Some artists are at the stage where they just need general encouragement. Its the beginning stages of a great artist. Resemblance Telling someone their character looks like someone else is unhelpful and sometimes insulting. Dont do it please. Unappealing If you tell an artist you dont like their image, how do you expect them to respond? Is it their fault that you dont like it? Do you have to like it to appreciate it? Raw Comments I go on about these sometimes. Basically, its a comment with no depth. Awesome is a grand example of this. Is that really the impression you want to leave on the artist? Do no other words come to mind when you look at it? First Comment! Yay! No yay. No. Just no. Just dont. I display my comments from newest to oldest. Dont be silly. Advertising Dont talk about your work when youre supposed to be talking about someone elses. Its extremely rude. Ungrateful Dont tell the artist theyre being ungrateful and should respond to your comments. Is art about artists or is it about art? Comparing Dont tell the artist they could do better. Dont you think that if they were capable of doing so, they would have? They may well have a reason for not doing better. Think first. Medium-Specific Here are other things to comment on according to the medium. These are the three I have experience in, so I cant comment on anything more. Sorry. Traditional Drawing Medium quality, courage, method of application, eraser usage, utilisation of materials Digital Drawing Brush usage, custom brushes, texture, layer usage, filter usage, file size/resolution Photography Focus, filters, lighting, angle, darkroom work, To Conclude And nothing else is coming to mind, so thats the end of that. Was that a tutorial? No? Oh well. If youre not sure how to put something, remember that everything comes down to opinion and intent. Dont feel bad about praising an artist, either! Critique doesnt have to be just whats wrong with the image OR even how to fix these errors, though the latter is quite valid. You are generally allowed to make suggestions, as long as you word them as such. You are also allowed to say positive things about a piece of work. Isnt that what its for? Why create art if there is no feeling of pride or success during the process or at the end? As a side note, why arent there tutorials on how to favourite a work yet I can easily write five pages on how to comment? |
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We never, had to fight in the first place
We only, had to spit back at their face
We won't, walk alone any longer
What doesn't kill us only makes us stronger
Its a very fascinating question, you may have heard that a painting at the National Gallery of Victoria worth $20mill and believed to be a Van Gogh was revealed to have been painted by another artist. Not as a forgery, it was simply miss-attributed. If this is true that $20mill painting would be worth close to nothing.
I know that in context your statement has nothing to do with any of this, but still, it makes you wonder - is art more about the artist than the art? or are they the same thing?
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"Art is what poetry can't describe; Poetry is what art can't picture."
"When the established members of academia start becoming vocal as to how poor your art is, then you know you're on to something."
Don't forget about Riiga, btw. I've got some plots lined up for our thread if you're still interested =]
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Every one of us has a beating heart, a pulsing soul, and a thinking mind inside of us and every heart and soul and mind has its limits.
My art
The whole "is it about the art or the artist" thing really caught my eye. That statement works on *so* many levels. <3
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If i go out and paint a replica of "the scream" exact in every detail, should mine be worth the same as the original? Of course not, I haven't really done anything at all, my painting might be able to invoke the same emotion, but thats not my fault, thats Edvard Munch's doing.
Thats my thought on the matter anyway.
I had forgotten about riiga actually, but I'm still interested, and just posted. On that topic, actually, have you noticed the startling number of "mercenary, but has strong set of morals" or "never judges, and is always willing to give a fair go." whats with this? do they think an evil character isn't engaging? or are they afraid that having a mass murderer for a character reflects badly on them? In fact, its not even that which makes me wonder, its the fact that they are trying to create a character that is 100% good, such a thing does not exist and the attempt to create one is what bad stories are made of. well, thats my rant against the average for the evening.
Toodles!
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"Art is what poetry can't describe; Poetry is what art can't picture."
"When the established members of academia start becoming vocal as to how poor your art is, then you know you're on to something."
Besides, such descriptions can't be taken word for word. They are only generalised and are subject to change due to the fact that they are indeed imperfect.
Rant all you like! I really don't mind thus far
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Every one of us has a beating heart, a pulsing soul, and a thinking mind inside of us and every heart and soul and mind has its limits.
My art
its very good hun
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Thank you so much for the good advice, and I appreciate the work you put into this for deviant-users!
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A Chorus Line: And all I could think was, "God, this is staged."
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A Chorus Line: And all I could think was, "God, this is staged."
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